I’m running.

11 May

Sometimes emotions get weird and I write poetry.  Just go with it.

 

I’m running

I take off. I’m free.
Dripping adrenaline–
I drip, for you, I sweat.

I flow.

I rain, I river. I run.

I flow.

I run far away.
We run–you drip
into me, we flow.
We radiate.

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24 Responses to “I’m running.”

  1. Pete Armetta May 11, 2012 at 12:05 pm #

    La la la la LA !!! This is totally cool, not weird at all. Why disparage such a beautiful muse as yours? :) Love it, keep em coming!!

    • La La May 11, 2012 at 12:12 pm #

      You know me, just feeling weird because I aim for laughs. Regardless, this wave is coming.

  2. Kyle May 11, 2012 at 12:08 pm #

    going with it.
    wonderful poetry

  3. chrisdevoss May 11, 2012 at 12:13 pm #

    You had me at: I rain, I river. I run.

    Nice job. Simple yet profound.

  4. Pigeon Heart May 11, 2012 at 1:32 pm #

    *Shine*

  5. rheath40 May 11, 2012 at 1:43 pm #

    Beautiful, beautiful honey. Sometimes we write about things that don’t fit into our idea of normal. But isn’t it fun when we do?

  6. diirrty May 11, 2012 at 2:05 pm #

    It sounds like you are…. flying!

    • La La May 11, 2012 at 2:23 pm #

      I’d like to, very much so!

  7. Madame Weebles May 11, 2012 at 7:17 pm #

    Brava!!

  8. pivoine68 May 12, 2012 at 11:23 am #

    Beautiful LaLa!

    Big bisous,
    Dawn

  9. jeandayfriday May 12, 2012 at 5:30 pm #

    I love this, LaLa! I love poetry and how it is so simple, yet expresses so much. Beautifully written!

  10. The Hook May 15, 2012 at 8:11 am #

    I’m glad I “went with it’!

  11. davidhardingblogs December 14, 2012 at 4:06 pm #

    Reminds me of that shwetty balls snl thing.

  12. David Stewart December 15, 2012 at 9:29 am #

    Looks like your muse strikes again. I like river as a verb, by the way. I’ll have to throw it casually into conversation in the coming week. Of course, I’ll probably blurt out something like “I’m going to go river” and people will just think I’m going to go take a leak.

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