Captured

23 Apr

I’ll want to frame his kisses,
write them down, keep them in deep pockets
and tightened in jars.

Much like a starlit sky,
warm summer sand
or the wowest we’ve ever felt (x infinity),

if only I could keep them (these magic moments),

I’d never have to wish for them ever,
not even once,
ever again.

26 Responses to “Captured”

  1. El Guapo at 9:41 pm #

    Hopefully, he will keep you awash in new ones.

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    • La La at 9:43 pm #

      Aw! Thanks, bud. 😀

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  2. Amy Reese at 9:47 pm #

    Oh, beautiful!! La La, I want to put my kisses in jars now, if it were possible.

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    • La La at 9:49 pm #

      You should! It probably works! (Maybe).

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  3. Bob at 9:52 pm #

    I never knew that you were such a closetawww romantic, you just melted my cold Canadian heart. Awww

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    • La La at 10:14 pm #

      Totally. You don’t even know. Glad you melted because it’s spring (if you have that there).

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  4. Maggie O'C at 9:52 pm #

    You have a gift sweetie, you are much more than Dear Vodka, but that will always be my fave as it brought me to you! xoxox to both of you.

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    • La La at 10:05 pm #

      AW. Thank you. That means so much. Xoxo.

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  5. Ruby Tuesday at 10:26 pm #

    This is absolutely breathtaking.

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  6. Cathy Ulrich at 10:37 pm #

    Wonderful, La La. I love your poetry.

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    • La La at 10:50 pm #

      Thank you, Cathy. That means a lot.

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  7. Quixotic Realist at 12:44 am #

    This was reallllly good.

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  8. gingerfightback at 3:35 am #

    Love is in the air!

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  9. paulasg75 at 7:06 am #

    This is about me, isn’t it?

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  10. Sean Smithson at 7:08 am #

    I didn’t know you did poetry and shit La La. Very cute. In fact, I may even use it on this chick I met in Oz!

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  11. Trent Lewin at 9:41 pm #

    La La, you’re the shit. Thank you for this.

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    • La La at 9:57 pm #

      Thank you for inspiring me. 🙂

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      • Trent Lewin at 9:59 pm #

        You’re a poet. You are.

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        • La La at 10:06 pm #

          Wow, thanks. That means a lot. I’ve always wanted to make a book of poetry.

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          • Trent Lewin at 10:12 pm #

            You should. You have a good voice. If I can say this, you have a clear voice too. A lot of poets try to be obscure and hide meanings in what they’re writing, until the hiding is more important than the poetry, and you spend your time guessing what the heck they were getting at… which is a waste of time, unless done perfectly. Your voice is clear.

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            • La La at 10:29 pm #

              Aw thanks so so much! You made my night.

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  12. Pigeon Heart at 2:54 am #

    I know love when I hear it. ❤ ❤ ❤

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  13. theclocktowersunset at 9:30 am #

    Looks like I’ve been missing out, this is lovely. Reminds me of someone, *edit out tears*

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