It sneaks in, pouring like warm honey
through the cracks of
my window shade.
The city streets stretch–
and slowly liven as
icy dew forms
upon my soul,
for I too must rise
and shine for another day of
absolute horseshit at literally the most
Mundane.
Job.
Ever.
Fine, sunrise,
you relentless nag.
I’m up,
but I swear I’ll quit today
if that bubbly,
know-it-all bitch, Denise,
doesn’t stop squawking about her wedding.
Now that’s poetry I can relate to!
Many a sunrise has been ruined by leading into a workday.
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Mooost of them😀
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Oh, that Denise. Will her antics ever end?
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Never. God help us when she has a baby.
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Lovely poem, La. Give in to the dark side.
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Haha, thanks!
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That’s the spirit! Up and at’em kiddo. (And if she keeps on and on, whip out that creditcard and send yourself some ridiculous amount of flowers from a secret admirer. That oughta change the subject.)
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Hahahaha yes!
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😉
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Dude. You killed it with that. I thought it was going to be all deep and shit. But no. Just no. Loved it. I don’t know Denise but I hate her now. Have a good day at work!
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Thanks, dude! It’s going ok so far. She must not be feeling well (ha!)
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You need to activate the ‘like’ button on comments!
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I’ll look into it. I was wondering how you did that.
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Settings > Sharing > and it’s the second to last button. Now do some work! Said the unemployed bum…
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Thank you, just did it. Get a job!! Ok, back to work I go.
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Beautiful, poetic words, La La. Great mix of sorrow and the beauty of a sunrise.
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The iambic pacing is wonderful, thoughtful and sticks it up Denise’s bottom!
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Thank you. Someone else commented and said it was sorrowful–so I’m glad you understood what was happening there.
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So tell me more about this wedding. It sounds fascinating!
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WELL it’s a sunset rustic barn wedding, something about pictures in a cornfield, blah blah blah that’s usually when I zone out.
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I love how you went from serene and calm to bored, angry warrior. Perfect!
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Thanks. That’s how I feel inside.😀
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HA!! Love it.
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Gracias!
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Oh, not the wedding talk! That’s the worst, and I’m sure I did it too. This made me laugh, La La!
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Thanks, Amy! If I was having a wedding I’d probably do it too, just not as loudly and boastfully.
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Ha. I shall call you- Rumi.
But srsly. That was great.
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I think that is one of the best poems I have ever read.
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Tell Denise to shut the fuck up!❤
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Hehehe
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That’s a great shift in tone from the sleepy, velvety description at the beginning to the griping at the end.🙂 I love it.
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Man… This is really good. You should do a book or something.
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Eh, nah. Books are overrated.
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Oh yeah. Good point.
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Dude. This is awesome. Great set up and pay-off. Let me know if you need Denise roughed up, I can send the Mounties, they’re not too busy right now.
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Ha! What do you think if a did a book of poems like this?
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I’d be okay with that, though I always like to read things that are mixed up a bit too. I like your romantic poems, too. Mixing it up, for me, tends to increase the impact of a change in style.
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Thanks, I always really appreciate your input.
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This is a beautiful photo Wonder woman!
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