Hugs All Over

14 Oct

I want to hug you
on Bahia Honda beach or
in Baltimore on an autumn afternoon.
We can hug in Central Park,
 
or on the glass skywalk
over the Grand Canyon.
It frightens us both,
but I want to hug you there
 
in snow or spring
or on state lines so
we can be in two places at once,
or four if we’re running west.
 
I have this feeling,
together we can do anything
and wherever we go,
I want to hug you there.

29 Responses to “Hugs All Over”

  1. Sandee's avatar
    Sword-chinned bitch October 14, 2012 at 12:02 pm #

    This makes me imagine the kind of feeling you have for a person that would inspire you to write this. It’s a very tender expression. There’s an airy feel to it as well.

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    • La La's avatar
      La La October 14, 2012 at 12:15 pm #

      That’s what I felt, and the dude needs a hug. xoxo

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  2. Nafees's avatar
    Nafees October 14, 2012 at 12:04 pm #

    sure why not πŸ˜€

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    • Carrie's avatar
      Carrie Rubin October 14, 2012 at 12:23 pm #

      Haha. Your comment made me laugh. πŸ™‚

      Enjoyed the poem, La La!

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      • La La's avatar
        La La October 14, 2012 at 12:24 pm #

        Gracias

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      • Nafees's avatar
        Nafees October 14, 2012 at 10:42 pm #

        lol I enjoyed my comment too because it was suitable for the poem. Yeah, imaginably I enjoyed the poem a lot πŸ˜‰

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  3. Wendell A. Brown's avatar
    Wendell A. Brown October 14, 2012 at 2:49 pm #

    Your words are a truly beautiful embrace of love…and the hug it brings…is so very longlasting. Your poem was a real joy to touch and consume! Thanks for the light it brought to my day my sister!

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    • La La's avatar
      La La October 14, 2012 at 2:55 pm #

      Thank you, that is very thoughtful of you to say. Have a wonderful day!

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  4. mikeakin1's avatar
    mikeakin1 October 14, 2012 at 4:55 pm #

    Made me think of the PA Maryland line. πŸ™‚

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    • La La's avatar
      La La October 14, 2012 at 4:57 pm #

      That’s what I was going for!

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      • mikeakin1's avatar
        mikeakin1 October 14, 2012 at 4:59 pm #

        That area brings back so many memories. πŸ™‚

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  5. Maddie Cochere's avatar
    Maddie Cochere October 14, 2012 at 6:12 pm #

    My first thought … “That was written by someone in love.” πŸ™‚ Very nice, La La.

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    • La La's avatar
      La La October 14, 2012 at 6:31 pm #

      I believe you just made me blush. Thank you!

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  6. Christopher De Voss's avatar
    Christopher De Voss October 14, 2012 at 6:45 pm #

    This piece is truly incredible. It took my breath away.

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    • La La's avatar
      La La October 14, 2012 at 6:48 pm #

      That’s what he does to me. Funny. πŸ™‚

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  7. Madame Weebles's avatar
    Madame Weebles October 14, 2012 at 9:33 pm #

    Awwww. Hugs to you too, La La.

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  8. becca3416's avatar
    becca3416 October 15, 2012 at 11:13 am #

    You are smitten, yes? I want to feel this way 😦

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    • La La's avatar
      La La October 18, 2012 at 10:43 pm #

      You will!

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  9. T. W. Dittmer's avatar
    T. W. Dittmer October 15, 2012 at 11:17 am #

    Warmth.

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    • La La's avatar
      La La October 18, 2012 at 10:43 pm #

      πŸ˜‰

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  10. DavidStill's avatar
    davidhardingblogs October 18, 2012 at 11:56 pm #

    I like this, which is weird because I don’t like touch.

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    • La La's avatar
      La La October 19, 2012 at 12:23 am #

      Thank you for this comment, it’s touching.

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  11. The Hook's avatar
    The Hook October 21, 2012 at 8:56 am #

    Hugs rule!

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  12. Amy Reese's avatar
    The Bumble Files October 21, 2012 at 2:41 pm #

    I need a hug now. You’re very talented, Lauren.

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  13. Lafemmeroar's avatar
    Lafemmeroar November 1, 2012 at 3:20 pm #

    This could be on a Valentine’s greeting card … so sweet! Tweeting it now πŸ™‚

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    • La La's avatar
      La La November 1, 2012 at 3:34 pm #

      That is so sweet. I meant it from the bottom of my heart. Thank you!

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      • Lafemmeroar's avatar
        Lafemmeroar November 9, 2012 at 4:06 pm #

        Oh you are very welcome! πŸ™‚

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