Hugs All Over

14 Oct

I want to hug you
on Bahia Honda beach or
in Baltimore on an autumn afternoon.
We can hug in Central Park,
 
or on the glass skywalk
over the Grand Canyon.
It frightens us both,
but I want to hug you there
 
in snow or spring
or on state lines so
we can be in two places at once,
or four if we’re running west.
 
I have this feeling,
together we can do anything
and wherever we go,
I want to hug you there.

29 Responses to “Hugs All Over”

  1. Sword-chinned bitch at 12:02 pm #

    This makes me imagine the kind of feeling you have for a person that would inspire you to write this. It’s a very tender expression. There’s an airy feel to it as well.

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    • La La at 12:15 pm #

      That’s what I felt, and the dude needs a hug. xoxo

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  2. Nafees at 12:04 pm #

    sure why not πŸ˜€

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    • Carrie Rubin at 12:23 pm #

      Haha. Your comment made me laugh. πŸ™‚

      Enjoyed the poem, La La!

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      • La La at 12:24 pm #

        Gracias

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      • Nafees at 10:42 pm #

        lol I enjoyed my comment too because it was suitable for the poem. Yeah, imaginably I enjoyed the poem a lot πŸ˜‰

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  3. Wendell A. Brown at 2:49 pm #

    Your words are a truly beautiful embrace of love…and the hug it brings…is so very longlasting. Your poem was a real joy to touch and consume! Thanks for the light it brought to my day my sister!

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    • La La at 2:55 pm #

      Thank you, that is very thoughtful of you to say. Have a wonderful day!

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  4. mikeakin1 at 4:55 pm #

    Made me think of the PA Maryland line. πŸ™‚

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    • La La at 4:57 pm #

      That’s what I was going for!

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      • mikeakin1 at 4:59 pm #

        That area brings back so many memories. πŸ™‚

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  5. Maddie Cochere at 6:12 pm #

    My first thought … “That was written by someone in love.” πŸ™‚ Very nice, La La.

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    • La La at 6:31 pm #

      I believe you just made me blush. Thank you!

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  6. Christopher De Voss at 6:45 pm #

    This piece is truly incredible. It took my breath away.

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    • La La at 6:48 pm #

      That’s what he does to me. Funny. πŸ™‚

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  7. Madame Weebles at 9:33 pm #

    Awwww. Hugs to you too, La La.

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  8. becca3416 at 11:13 am #

    You are smitten, yes? I want to feel this way 😦

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  9. T. W. Dittmer at 11:17 am #

    Warmth.

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  10. davidhardingblogs at 11:56 pm #

    I like this, which is weird because I don’t like touch.

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    • La La at 12:23 am #

      Thank you for this comment, it’s touching.

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  11. The Hook at 8:56 am #

    Hugs rule!

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  12. The Bumble Files at 2:41 pm #

    I need a hug now. You’re very talented, Lauren.

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  13. Lafemmeroar at 3:20 pm #

    This could be on a Valentine’s greeting card … so sweet! Tweeting it now πŸ™‚

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    • La La at 3:34 pm #

      That is so sweet. I meant it from the bottom of my heart. Thank you!

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