Idea Sun Bursting

2 Aug

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4.30.13

Connecting the dots on his neck,
my lips making constellations
in the celestial sphere, exposed,
we smoothly spread in the vault of heaven

 

Verb

Some are lucky enough to
uproot, escape
the blind cacophony of
aahs and oohs,

and blend
freely, openly
into the Ultimate Verb

 

Eros, Philia and Agape

One soul, two bodies,
both with hopeful intensity
that transcends physical appetite.
My best friend, equal, alike in virtue,
we know passion without necessity of reciprocity.
Pure, this is love that consumes and surpasses all else.

36 Responses to “Idea Sun Bursting”

  1. wakinyanwinyan at 12:04 pm #

    “Be Love.”

    I agree, wholeheartedly. What a simple, yet beautiful post.

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    • La La at 12:09 pm #

      Why thank you. I saw that this morning behind a gas station. Have a great weekend!

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  2. Jen and Tonic at 12:15 pm #

    I feel like I need a cigarette! And I mean that as a compliment.

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    • La La at 12:19 pm #

      I read this and triumphantly said aloud, “Aw yeaaah, girl!” and the girl sitting next to me looked over and questioned me with her drawn on eyebrows.

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      • BrainRants at 9:34 pm #

        Drawn-ons suck. Fucking creepy clowny shit.

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  3. rheath40 at 12:33 pm #

    Wish I could write poetry like this my dear. So passionate.

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  4. Katie at 12:45 pm #

    Lovely!

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  5. Sandee at 2:28 pm #

    This IS really nice. Boo hoo hoo, I should go on match.com so I can meet this person — hahaha!

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    • La La at 3:17 pm #

      Hahaha. I’ve missed you!

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      • Sandee at 3:26 pm #

        At least I know where I can find you! Have a good weekend La La!

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  6. Ashley Austrew at 5:28 pm #

    Love this. If you ever want to, consider submitting something to Tipsy Lit. I’m the poetry submissions editor 🙂

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    • La La at 6:56 pm #

      I’m in. Also, I’m tipsy right now so that works out. 😉

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  7. Maggie O'C at 7:05 pm #

    Writing like this has to be inspired by reality.

    Yay La La!!!

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    • La La at 8:24 pm #

      Girl. You know. I was just talking about you.

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  8. BrainRants at 9:35 pm #

    This post made me feel kinda dirty. Thank you!

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    • La La at 9:48 pm #

      I was going for love, but cool. De nada, broseph.

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  9. Trent Lewin at 1:38 am #

    Beautiful stuff my friend.

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  10. Oh the splendor of young love… and by young, I mean, not married 30 years. *wink, wink* Beautiful poetry.

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    • La La at 12:33 pm #

      Loooove is a maanny splendored thing. 😉

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  11. Lafemmeroar at 1:00 pm #

    simply lovely!

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  12. stillstella at 5:32 pm #

    Like your writing. How long have you been doing it?

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  13. Anonymous at 10:35 am #

    Very, very beautiful work. Whoever the lucky guy is to have had Ms. LaLa write these in consideration for him, he is truly just that—lucky. I think these are great and that you are amazing 🙂 #BabyQueen

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    • La La at 11:21 am #

      🙂

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      • Anonymous at 12:45 pm #

        Skoodalooooop

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