Idea Sun Bursting

2 Aug




Connecting the dots on his neck,
my lips making constellations
in the celestial sphere, exposed,
we smoothly spread in the vault of heaven



Some are lucky enough to
uproot, escape
the blind cacophony of
aahs and oohs,

and blend
freely, openly
into the Ultimate Verb


Eros, Philia and Agape

One soul, two bodies,
both with hopeful intensity
that transcends physical appetite.
My best friend, equal, alike in virtue,
we know passion without necessity of reciprocity.
Pure, this is love that consumes and surpasses all else.


36 Responses to “Idea Sun Bursting”

  1. wakinyanwinyan August 2, 2013 at 12:04 pm #

    “Be Love.”

    I agree, wholeheartedly. What a simple, yet beautiful post.


    • La La August 2, 2013 at 12:09 pm #

      Why thank you. I saw that this morning behind a gas station. Have a great weekend!


  2. Jen and Tonic August 2, 2013 at 12:15 pm #

    I feel like I need a cigarette! And I mean that as a compliment.


    • La La August 2, 2013 at 12:19 pm #

      I read this and triumphantly said aloud, “Aw yeaaah, girl!” and the girl sitting next to me looked over and questioned me with her drawn on eyebrows.


  3. rheath40 August 2, 2013 at 12:33 pm #

    Wish I could write poetry like this my dear. So passionate.


  4. Katie August 2, 2013 at 12:45 pm #



  5. Sandee August 2, 2013 at 2:28 pm #

    This IS really nice. Boo hoo hoo, I should go on so I can meet this person — hahaha!


    • La La August 2, 2013 at 3:17 pm #

      Hahaha. I’ve missed you!


      • Sandee August 2, 2013 at 3:26 pm #

        At least I know where I can find you! Have a good weekend La La!


  6. Ashley Austrew August 2, 2013 at 5:28 pm #

    Love this. If you ever want to, consider submitting something to Tipsy Lit. I’m the poetry submissions editor 🙂


  7. Maggie O'C August 2, 2013 at 7:05 pm #

    Writing like this has to be inspired by reality.

    Yay La La!!!


    • La La August 2, 2013 at 8:24 pm #

      Girl. You know. I was just talking about you.


  8. BrainRants August 2, 2013 at 9:35 pm #

    This post made me feel kinda dirty. Thank you!


    • La La August 2, 2013 at 9:48 pm #

      I was going for love, but cool. De nada, broseph.


  9. Trent Lewin August 3, 2013 at 1:38 am #

    Beautiful stuff my friend.


  10. talesfromthemotherland August 3, 2013 at 12:19 pm #

    Oh the splendor of young love… and by young, I mean, not married 30 years. *wink, wink* Beautiful poetry.


    • La La August 3, 2013 at 12:33 pm #

      Loooove is a maanny splendored thing. 😉


  11. Lafemmeroar August 4, 2013 at 1:00 pm #

    simply lovely!


  12. stillstella August 4, 2013 at 5:32 pm #

    Like your writing. How long have you been doing it?


  13. Anonymous August 8, 2013 at 10:35 am #

    Very, very beautiful work. Whoever the lucky guy is to have had Ms. LaLa write these in consideration for him, he is truly just that—lucky. I think these are great and that you are amazing 🙂 #BabyQueen


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